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maggieddd
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« on: April 22, 2006, 05:58:55 PM »
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This picture was taken with slide film. I processed it twice in Photoshop. Once for the sky and once for the pyramid. Then I merged them together.
What do you think, and what could I do to improve it.
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maggieddd
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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2006, 07:21:34 PM »
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I thought the first version was a bit flat, so I changed it.  What do you think?
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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2006, 03:07:47 PM »
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The first one is flat, I agree.  There are parts of the second one that I like better but I don't really like what it is doing to parts of the pyramid.  Should be a nice image with the right conversion.  Maybe blend the two conversions to take the edge off?  What does the color version look like?
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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2006, 04:37:16 PM »
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I thought the first version was a bit flat, so I changed it.  What do you think?
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The first version was a bit flat, but the contrast has obscured interesting detail in the second one--I would work on finding some middle ground with smoother tonalities but more contrast.
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