Well, you pointed out the obvious points... to me, all of the trees in the foreground make it look cluttered. It looks like you're standing near the edge of a drop down to the lake. If you have the opportunity to go back to that place again, I'd suggest moving forward some to elimate the 'curtain' of trees. The point coming out from the left into the lake would give you a more pleasing composition without that screen.
Thanks Mike. I will be going back at some point in the near future.