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Timo Löfgren
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« on: February 02, 2008, 03:30:38 AM »
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.... Jihuu      

(Pentax 645 + 35mm Fuji new Velvia 50 ..... B&W linear pola + Lee 0,9 grad hard, and straw 3.)
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« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2008, 09:56:55 AM »
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It needs more detai to my eye.  The bottom 1/4 is pretty much lost - maybe a better crop and some PS tweaks for exposure?
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« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2008, 10:06:41 AM »
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Try cropping it square.
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« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2008, 10:46:29 AM »
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I agree that a different crop would help -- try either making it square or even landscape.
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« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2008, 11:13:45 PM »
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I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:



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« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2008, 03:50:32 PM »
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I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:


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« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2008, 04:06:33 PM »
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I like the original.  Alain's is nice, too.
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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2008, 01:40:53 PM »
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I like the original.  Alain's is nice, too.
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I'm with Alain.  Timo, its a lovely photograph, Alain's consumate experience/skill has made it sing.
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2008, 10:48:27 PM »
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I like the sense in the original that the rock is both rising out of the sea and out of the shadows--I think Alain's edit somewhat compromises that, and perhaps there could be some middle ground between too much shadow and essentially eliminating it.
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