Sunrise

[Timo Löfgren]

.... Jihuu      

(Pentax 645 + 35mm Fuji new Velvia 50 ..... B&W linear pola + Lee 0,9 grad hard, and straw 3.)

[kaelaria]

It needs more detai to my eye.  The bottom 1/4 is pretty much lost - maybe a better crop and some PS tweaks for exposure?

[Jonathan Wienke]

Try cropping it square.

[Gabe]

I agree that a different crop would help -- try either making it square or even landscape.

[alainbriot]

I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:



Alain

[Neil Hunt]

I don't see anything wrong with the composition but I suggest adjusting the color and contrast. Here's a suggestion:


Alain
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Free master class for you Timo!

[DarkPenguin]

I like the original.  Alain's is nice, too.

[Provokot]

I like the original.  Alain's is nice, too.
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I'm with Alain.  Timo, its a lovely photograph, Alain's consumate experience/skill has made it sing.

[larkvi]

I like the sense in the original that the rock is both rising out of the sea and out of the shadows--I think Alain's edit somewhat compromises that, and perhaps there could be some middle ground between too much shadow and essentially eliminating it.