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« on: June 14, 2008, 10:20:15 PM »
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Thanks!
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« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2008, 01:34:27 AM »
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Not sure... looks like it might have potential, but... can't quite put my finger on it...

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« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2008, 10:23:45 AM »
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Extraordinary, great light, colours and correct exposure to make it look dramatic. ** I would like to see a 2nd shot with a view camera and no diverging lines. Exactly parallel lines from top to bottom...

Looks like you had to wait some time for the light. Well done!
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« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2008, 08:48:33 PM »
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Not sure... looks like it might have potential, but... can't quite put my finger on it...

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I would like to see a 2nd shot with a view camera and no diverging lines. Exactly parallel lines from top to bottom...

That's a good idea.  I don't have a view camera, but maybe I could stitch several shots and correct perspective in photoshop.

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« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2008, 10:39:54 PM »
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Here's another version, taken just a few minutes after the above image.  Which do you like more?



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« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2008, 12:08:40 AM »
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2nd one....love the highlight off the windows.
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« Reply #6 on: June 19, 2008, 03:23:43 PM »
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2nd one....love the highlight off the windows.
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I like the 2nd one too.Maybe a bird in the shot or a moon?
Just a thought.
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« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2008, 01:46:04 AM »
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I really like the simplicity in this picture - Less is More. But, there is something wrong with the sky. I think the noise makes the sky look dirty.

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« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2008, 04:39:55 PM »
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I much prefer the second image, which is about the building (which is beautifully lit) with a very nice sky for a background. The first photo seems murky to me, and the sky and the building are competing for attention.
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« Reply #9 on: June 23, 2008, 05:40:05 PM »
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I'd like to see a bit more of the building and a bit less sky. Or maybe the other way around. As it is, they're not helping each other in the composition.
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