C&C please?

[button]

Thanks!

[wolfnowl]

Not sure... looks like it might have potential, but... can't quite put my finger on it...

Mike.

[hs0zfe]

Extraordinary, great light, colours and correct exposure to make it look dramatic. ** I would like to see a 2nd shot with a view camera and no diverging lines. Exactly parallel lines from top to bottom...

Looks like you had to wait some time for the light. Well done!

[button]

Not sure... looks like it might have potential, but... can't quite put my finger on it...

Mike.
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I think I should desaturate the clouds a bit to add a bit more interest.  I'll repost...

I would like to see a 2nd shot with a view camera and no diverging lines. Exactly parallel lines from top to bottom...

That's a good idea.  I don't have a view camera, but maybe I could stitch several shots and correct perspective in photoshop.

John

[button]

Here's another version, taken just a few minutes after the above image.  Which do you like more?



John

[BFoto]

2nd one....love the highlight off the windows.

[peteh]

2nd one....love the highlight off the windows.
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I like the 2nd one too.Maybe a bird in the shot or a moon?
Just a thought.

[berbig]

Thanks!
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I really like the simplicity in this picture - Less is More. But, there is something wrong with the sky. I think the noise makes the sky look dirty.

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[JDClements]

I much prefer the second image, which is about the building (which is beautifully lit) with a very nice sky for a background. The first photo seems murky to me, and the sky and the building are competing for attention.

[popnfresh]

I'd like to see a bit more of the building and a bit less sky. Or maybe the other way around. As it is, they're not helping each other in the composition.