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Drew M Wright
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« on: July 25, 2008, 11:30:04 AM »
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Overprocessed?
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« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2008, 11:39:31 AM »
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I like the way the array of flower stems echoes the sun rays, and the colour harmonies here.
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DarkPenguin
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« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2008, 11:40:06 AM »
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Either over or under.

The two flowers in the front are chopped on the bottom.  All I can see now.
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« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2008, 07:11:03 PM »
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To be honest, I would snap up the local contrast, darken the sky, and lighten the flowers. So, for me I would say it wasn't overprocessed, no. Nice shot, though.
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« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2008, 02:46:18 AM »
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The two flowers in the front are chopped on the bottom.  All I can see now.
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Hi Mr P

Itīs catching, the cutting...

Reminds me of the craze for cutting off modelsī heads or, in this case, feet. Have to admit guilt - regarding heads - as an aide to anonymity.

Rob C
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« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2008, 07:04:04 AM »
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FWIW, to me it's less an issue of overprocessing and more one of competing stories. I'd give k bennett's suggestion above a try. (You might try looking at the image upside down -- what bennett is suggesting pops out.) Compositionally, given what's happening on the top & sides, it feels like the bottom might want a bit more breathing room.
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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2008, 12:26:05 PM »
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Took this image on the way back from dinner in Grand Teton National Park a few weeks back.  Thoughts?
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It is a nice image and  those light rays are lovely. I would actually lean in the direction of _more_ "processing" - the current rendition strikes me as being a bit dark, at least on my monitor.

I agree with the points about composition. Given what you have here I might also consider a bit of a crop on the left side where the ridge begins to rise again.

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Dan
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« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2008, 06:21:50 PM »
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It reminds me of something......hmmm.....
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