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Josh-H
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« on: December 14, 2008, 02:14:13 AM »
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I shot this last week at London Bridge near Portsea. I really like the foreground rock and the sweep of the sandstone.

Comments welcome.

Canon 1DSMK3 w/ 16-35mm F2.8L - 2 Stop ND Grad - PP L.R 2.1
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« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2008, 04:47:30 PM »
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Quote from: Josh-H
I shot this last week at London Bridge near Portsea. I really like the foreground rock and the sweep of the sandstone.

Comments welcome.

Canon 1DSMK3 w/ 16-35mm F2.8L - 2 Stop ND Grad - PP L.R 2.1
I think the greys look a bit dull; you miss what makes the image go POP. I'm also wondering if it wouldn't work better with a different crop. Try losing the right 25% and bottom 15% or so, taking advantage of the path made by the light-toned sand.

I'd advise against using the"clarity" slider with this one, there is already a slight hint of haloing around the large rock in the background.

Personally, I'd like to see this one in colour, or perhaps a discreet sepia.
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« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2008, 12:33:56 AM »
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Overall I like it, but as was stated above, the grays are a bit flat and I'd also go with chopping off maybe a quarter of the bottom.

Mike.
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