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mtnmanjc
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« on: February 14, 2009, 05:05:28 PM »
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Hey Everyone,

Here is another image from our recent trip to California.  This image was taken in Point Reyes National Seashore.

Trail to the Sea


All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated!


Thanks,
Joel
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« Reply #1 on: February 15, 2009, 10:33:47 AM »
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Quote from: mtnmanjc
Hey Everyone,

Here is another image from our recent trip to California.  This image was taken in Point Reyes National Seashore.

Trail to the Sea


All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated!


Thanks,
Joel

Lovely photo - just the kind of scene I would shoot! I might have approached it a bit differently, here are my thoughts.

- The hills to the right and left are relatively uninteresting and perhaps could take up less of the image. Shoot as a vertical?

- If you like leaving the hills in, it might look better if they were balanced in terms of brightness. As it is, the left hill is a bit lighter.

- The trail itself. If it's an important part of the picture to you - "here I am walking toward this beautiful scene" - then I would like to see more of it. If it's not important, could it be left out of the image?

Cheers,

Peter
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« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 07:39:28 PM »
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Thanks Peter, I'll experiment some more with the image.  I appreciate your comment!!!

Thanks,
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