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EasyEd
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« on: March 14, 2009, 11:58:51 AM »
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Hey All,

Since that first image went over with such a dull thud... I thought I'd try again. I will get to some landscapes soon.

Cropped from a larger image - no further PP.

C&C Welcome!

-Ed-
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« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2009, 01:43:31 PM »
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Looks like it wants to be in portrait orientation.
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« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2009, 03:44:23 PM »
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Quote from: Tim Gray
Looks like it wants to be in portrait orientation.

Maybe... it would be worth a try.  Looks like there's something in that image trying to get out.

Mike.
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« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2009, 04:28:26 PM »
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[attachment=12161:Fire_1.jpg]

 Just a few tweaks. YMMV

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« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2009, 09:37:45 PM »
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This is much different from the first. This one has a lot going on, in several different directions, competing for the viewer's interest and attention. The first thing I'd do is some kind of simplification, to give it more of a coherence. Chaos is OK of course, that's the nature of fire, but it's still hard to digest.
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« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2009, 07:54:25 PM »
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Hey All,

Thank You All!

Tim the original has a corner that pretty clearly "anchors" the image to a landscape orientation. With this crop portrait works fine and perhaps is the better choice. I'm going to continue working on this one as well as I think it is a "keeper" - as think what some representation of this image looks like printed "big" (whatever that means).

-Ed-
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« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 07:29:24 AM »
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The tweaked version works much better for me.
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