Here it is John, what do you think?
I like the darker clouds, especially against the blue sky. I'm not sure what I think about the burned lake- I might have been wrong about that one. If I personally were printing this photo, I would increase the brightness and contrast a bit, to make the image more striking. I think that would be a reasonable thing to do, given that there is impending action. I really like the image, and I know it would look good hanging on a wall, printed around 2-3 feet wide.