Hey, maybe thats not pro level but I like the light and how she is looking! I see too many people photographs around other forums with artificial, staged smiles. But not this image. It seems she is sceptical, hesistating, unsure about the situation. A honest expression, and I like that.
Glad you like it, especially as you have seen a lot but disappointed that you do not think it is up to a high standard. What do you feel is letting it down?