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mokenny
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« on: December 24, 2009, 11:59:58 PM »
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Picture taken with  Panasonic Lumix gf1, 14-45 mm kit.  b&w conversion with bw styler.
comments welcome as to how to improve the picture
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« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2009, 09:41:21 AM »
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I think it's a great still life.  Vignetting gives it a feeling of nostalgia.  I don't think I would change a thing.  Nice job.
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« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2009, 09:57:13 AM »
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I think it's a great still life.  Vignetting gives it a feeling of nostalgia.  I don't think I would change a thing.  Nice job.
I agree, the gradual transition from areas of light to dark is wonderful.

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« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2009, 10:15:30 AM »
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Absolutely wonderful!
Did you shoot it with a square aspect ratio or did you crop it later?
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« Reply #4 on: December 29, 2009, 10:23:13 AM »
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Picture taken with  Panasonic Lumix gf1, 14-45 mm kit.  b&w conversion with bw styler.
comments welcome as to how to improve the picture
Mokenny

I think this is very well done, it has a lovely tonal range. The only changes I can suggest is to crop out a bit at the bottom to show the entire wheel (if possible), and crop in at the left to hide the stick. I can't tell if those would really be improvements without trying.
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