I'm not sure...
Sorry, Jeremy. It doesn't move me nearly as much as others you have posted. It reminds me too much of several hundred of my own photos of similar subjects that seemed like a good idea at the time but came out blah in the print.
I usually don't comment when I don't care for an image (unless I can see a quick fix for it), but I thought I would this time because I like your other photos so much better.
Maybe someone else will love it.