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« Reply #20 on: November 03, 2010, 03:29:58 AM »
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It looks like you have been stalking her. Smiley Wink
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« Reply #21 on: November 03, 2010, 09:32:09 AM »
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I like the theme but i'm not quite satisfied...what do you think?
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I like the theme too. But(t)...
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« Reply #22 on: November 08, 2010, 08:07:08 PM »
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Well, I'm impressed with the "people shots", they are very good storytelling images.

The image of the man with a beard is quite unique. It makes me wonder why his hands are spread, or what he might be trying to say. You've cropped it pretty tight - I might have included a bit more of his legs - this is sometimes called a "three-quarter shot."

I also like your use of depth of field, with the subject sharp and background out of focus. This gives the viewer fewer distractions, and more attention to your subject.

I also feel that you nailed the exposure. Many times this kind of shot is over-compensated for bright elements in the background, leaving the subject under-exposed.

The bridge shot is a very pleasant snapshot, but has a number of problems. Contrast is very flat, and overall the image is quite cluttered. At the least, I would crop the foreground, as the water doesn't really add much to the impact.

The image "Porto" is very good - the two silhouetted figures, and their angled shadows, are striking, to say the least. Some might say you cropped too close to their heads, but I think the crop creates some interesting energy and tension in composition. It works.

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« Reply #23 on: November 09, 2010, 04:47:49 PM »
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"And Now for Something Completely Different"



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"It's all so boring here, Margo - there's nothing but playboys and tennis pros."
http://portostreetshooting.blogspot.com/
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« Reply #24 on: November 09, 2010, 06:23:39 PM »
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now THAT'S COOL!

great composition, color, imagination - nailed it!

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« Reply #25 on: November 20, 2010, 06:57:27 AM »
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Woman in Red.

Which one? 1st, 2nd, none?



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thanks

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"It's all so boring here, Margo - there's nothing but playboys and tennis pros."
http://portostreetshooting.blogspot.com/
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