Not sure what you did with it, but it is evocative of winter activity but in a a daydream way- like someone slowing down time so you can capture a moment. Nicely done.
While I wasn't consciously trying for a "daydream" effect, I do like that description. This was our first time dog sledding and the experience does indeed tend to carry you away from the cares and realities of the world. With the mountainous expanses of untrodden snow, a silence broken only by an occasional bark or the scratching sound of the sled skis on the packed trail snow and the stream splashing against the rocks, how could it not?