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kikashi
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« on: November 13, 2011, 07:06:30 AM »
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« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2011, 01:32:26 PM »
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For me, a tighter composition on the trees would have worked better Jeremy. The detail I would like to see on them is too subtle.
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« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2011, 05:15:10 PM »
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The angles work for me, although I'm wondering if a square presentation would help to accentuate those lines?

Also, the plants on the right with the white tops are a little distracting from what to me is all about the lines and angles - too bright.

Overall, though, I find it interesting and it draws me in.
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