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Rjohan
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« on: August 18, 2012, 03:01:59 AM »
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Hello everyone!

So, this morning I had the alarm set to 03:20. During this week we have had quite a lot of fog in the morning here in Stockholm, Sweden. Lovely, but it's annoying that you can't go out and shoot when you're on your way to work..
Today I had some nice fog and got some shots I like. The image below is a panorama made by 9 vertical images. Hope you like it!



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« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 08:52:50 AM »
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Early bird! I like it but wish that the sky had more features (either a bit more contrast or colours; certainly not Velvia-like). It's a peaceful shot.

Edit: I'm looking at your image on my very old MacBook display, so my remark might not be valid at all.
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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2012, 01:50:25 PM »
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Thank you for the comment! The sky is kinda weak in the colors but that's how I saw it that morning, I don't like to push my images too much in LR.
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« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 02:26:04 PM »
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To me, the most interesting part of the image is the mid-right.  The foreground doesn't do much for me at this size. I think I would crop out 2/3 of the left and work with the horizontal lines formed from the fore,mid and backgrounds.
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« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 03:06:44 PM »
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I agree that the elements don't quite hang together somehow. Crop off the right 1/3?
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« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2012, 02:27:22 AM »
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Thank you for the comment! The sky is kinda weak in the colors but that's how I saw it that morning, I don't like to push my images too much in LR.

Got to see it on a proper display and the sky is just right. You're right, for that kind of image, no need to push saturation…
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« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2012, 12:00:12 PM »
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Thank you for the critique about the crop, I'll try it out!
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