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Roberto Frieri
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« on: November 11, 2012, 03:34:16 AM »
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Some shots from my last portfolio.
The portfolio is made of 18 images: http://www.robertofrieri.net/womenintheautumn.html
Hope you like it.
As always, I would be extremely grateful for any critic or advice.
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« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2012, 03:55:21 AM »
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Nice ladies and interesting angles. I found the backgrounds more or less distracting in all of them - not so much in the third - and the large whitish area in the front left of the first also distracting.
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« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2012, 02:48:45 PM »
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It's a cute bunch of girls, Roberto, but I have to agree with Ken about #1. Unlike Ken I find the background in #4 even more distracting than the backgrounds in the other three. Also, in #4, I'd dodge the girl's eyes to a brighter level. It almost looks as if somebody's punched her in both eyes.
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« Reply #3 on: November 13, 2012, 01:21:11 AM »
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Thank you Ken and Russ for your feedback.
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