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armand
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November 17, 2012, 12:49:49 PM »
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A bw version of one of my favorite shots. Taken with a D50 with kit lens.
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November 17, 2012, 02:43:32 PM »
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I like the textures and particularly the delicacy of the tables against the roughness of the treees. I feel an impulse to crop it to make the two big trees a little more central, although not symmetrically central. But I know such impulses often end in tears.
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Hmmm... even though the tree on the left is more central, I think the weight of it is balanced nicely by the two tables and the other tree. I wouldn't change it.
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November 18, 2012, 10:14:33 AM »
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I'm ok with the current crop. I did try a more severe one but didn't feel better and it's worth saying this is already quite cropped. From a 6 MP D50 shot it has maybe 50% left of the surface, so an equivalent of 3 MP or so.
Post processing I'm still debating but I'm tempted to leave it like this, without too much contrast, as it fits better with the message.
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November 18, 2012, 10:29:56 AM »
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Hi Armand, I like this image, too. Very simple but very powerful. The vertical lines of the trunks and horizontal of the ground work nicely together. Well done!
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November 18, 2012, 11:35:23 AM »
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I like the image,
but sensitive as i am to - almost straight - i would have liked it turned a bit..
( yes I am doing architecture)
greetings..
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