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kikashi
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« on: November 25, 2012, 12:03:04 PM »
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Preference? Comments?

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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2012, 12:16:47 PM »
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#2

Slightly better (more balanced) composition and more visible light/shadow interplay. Slightly more abstract as well.
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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2012, 01:24:41 PM »
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I'd like the forms in #1, especially the zig-zag, with the light and composition in #2.
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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 02:37:50 PM »
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Interesting shots almost abstract...again not a great deal in it, for me the 2nd shot has a better tonal range helped out by the shadows, i think the textures come across a little better in the 2nd as well.
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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 02:53:08 PM »
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I like both, but the second wins for me: more interesting, balanced composition.
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« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2012, 05:37:46 PM »
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A bit late to the vote but I actually prefer the composition in #1 because of the intersection of the 2 diagonals and the vertical near the top right 3rd point.  I do prefer the tonality of #2.
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« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2012, 04:11:40 AM »
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I prefer #2. I like how the shadows play with the eroded surface of the angled rocks.
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« Reply #7 on: November 28, 2012, 12:12:37 PM »
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Thanks, all. I had a vague preference for #2 but you've hardened it.

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