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stamper
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« on: December 08, 2012, 05:27:47 AM »
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I am not sure if this works?
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« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 09:34:24 AM »
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My eye goes straight across the bay to the light. The trailer seems lost in the busy foreground and water.
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« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2012, 02:18:37 PM »
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The foreground is strong and full of interest.
The middle ground - the water - works well.
The background seems to be very weak with very little to balance the composition.
The lights on the far shore do draw the eye across the water - not a bad thing in itself - however there is nothing of real interest to keep the attention there.

I am not sure how the colour version would look.

Those of us who shoot landscapes regularly probably have several images like it - the almost but not quite result.
Well worth posting though.

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« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2012, 03:31:23 AM »
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I' seeing this photo as two images (or two subjects). My eyes either stay on the trailer or forget the the trailer and stay on the water and distant landscape.
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« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2012, 04:05:47 AM »
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Thanks for the feedback. The doubts raised mirror my thoughts. I think anyone seeing it that knows the scene might like it better.
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