Ok, I went back to the drawing board and came up with the following.
The cows were clearly a lost cause. Apparently there is not much you can do to make a bucolic view more exciting.
Even to my untrained eye, the finches benefited from your advice Mike. As a bonus, I added my first largish-scale panorama - I was feeling ambitious and used 7 stitched images taken with the long lens.
Fire away.
