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Chris Calohan
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« on: December 12, 2012, 07:24:25 AM »
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A bit more closer to a true 16:9 with a bit of cloning here and there.

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« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 07:42:42 AM »
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This seems to be a good example of a... bad bokeh. By that I mean not just unpleasant in itself, but actually distracting from the main subject.

I think the initial idea is ok. It's just that it might work better with a different treatment, like a shallower DOF and less contrast. It also looks like the light was too harsh, resulting in burned out highlights.
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« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2012, 01:19:00 AM »
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It's just that it might work better with a different treatment, like a shallower DOF and less contrast.

Thanks for putting my thoughts into words!

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« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2012, 05:09:09 AM »
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What, exactly, are you after with this, Chris?
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« Reply #4 on: December 14, 2012, 09:09:48 AM »
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I actually think the bokeh is more interesting than the subject.....
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« Reply #5 on: December 14, 2012, 04:28:58 PM »
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What, exactly, are you after with this, Chris?

Really as looking for the separation for subject and bokeh.
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« Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 05:11:00 PM »
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Okay. That's a fair test. I do that kind of thing all the time. But is it a picture you want to post?
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