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michswiss
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Eric Myrvaagnes
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Form echoing form in both of them.
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Hi Jennifer,
Unusually, this time I prefer your landscape. The second shot just looks a mess to me.
Sorry, but there you go.
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These are both very nice.
The second one's a bit disconcerting, since it's a disaster as a "picture of a girl" but as an exercise in form it's quite nice, and it has a little touch of naughty and erotic thrown in, which kind of conflicts with the "this is not a picture of a girl but an exercise in form".
Suffice it to say, my reaction to the second one is complex, but overall I quite like it.
The first one is nice, but not complex at all, and I find it more of a good example of an overdone form without much new to say. But, still nice to look at and very very pleasing.
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I more or less agree with amolitor. Another possible title for the second one is Personal Space. I like how the bench and wall , etc., seem one with the picture plane and or frame. She helps by alining her leg with the edge and putting her head tangent to it. Or did you do that.
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