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kikashi
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« on: January 19, 2013, 06:16:46 AM »
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Any more than just quaint?

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Tony Jay
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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2013, 06:33:49 AM »
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Jeremy, would you consider vignetting this image to a degree to focus attention on the subject a bit more effectively?

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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2013, 11:29:54 AM »
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Quote from: Tony Jay on January 19, 2013, 06:33:49 AM
Jeremy, would you consider vignetting this image to a degree to focus attention on the subject a bit more effectively?

I would! Now you mention it, I'm slightly emabarrassed that I didn't think of it myself.

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« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2013, 05:29:06 PM »
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It's a charmer. I like the fact that the shadows are so much wider than the roller frame (because you photographed them edge on.)

I agree that some vignetting is worth a try.
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« Reply #4 on: January 20, 2013, 10:05:13 AM »
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Something like this, perhaps? I've added a bit of grain as well as a vignette.

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