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marvpelkey
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January 21, 2013, 08:03:04 PM »
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Little bit of fog, little bit of sunrise, little bit of bridge.
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Nice abstract qualities.
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Quote from: marvpelkey on January 21, 2013, 08:03:04 PM
Little bit of fog, little bit of sunrise, little bit of bridge.
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It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.
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Quote from: kikashi on January 22, 2013, 02:13:37 AM
It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.
Jeremy
It wouldn't be hard to remove it from the photo. As it is, the lamp is probably in the best possible place.
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The street lamp doesn't bother me. I like it just as it is.
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Quote from: kikashi on January 22, 2013, 02:13:37 AM
It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.
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Unless the point of the picture is intended to be unidentified diagonals in fog I think the lamp is an important part of the picture. Without the lamp, the only reason to see this as a bridge is the title. But the lamp belongs closer to the right side of the picture -- about a third of the way in from the edge. Yes, I know, everybody will tell you that we shouldn't genuflect to the rule of thirds, and occasionally that's an attitude that fits the situation. But not this time.
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January 22, 2013, 04:35:10 PM »
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I'm anti-lamp on this one. I like the colours and composition.
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There are strong graphical elements in this image and lovely light. In short there is a lot to like. I do think it would be stronger without the light pole though as its counterproductive to the strong ordered geometry.
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Thanks, all, for the comments. To my right was some very cold river water, to my left a thicket of brambles, so I was quite restricted in what I could do with the composition. Having said that, I kind of like the inclusion of the lamp.
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