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« on: February 17, 2013, 08:36:22 PM »
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« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 09:32:43 PM »
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"You should have seen the other guy" - based on the number of stitches this one got  Grin
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« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 09:33:14 AM »
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I see the concept well enough. It's a creative idea. But the photograph "of that idea" isn't delivering much punch. It might be simply too obvious. I don't think it's a technical problem with the photograph, it is photographed well enough. If you still like the idea, PURSUE IT. Which mean, find another way to present this idea with a photograph. Try something else.

There's always this conflict: What your mind imagines the photograph will look like vs. what actually comes out on the photograph. When it doesn't work, think about why, adjust your plan, and re-photograph it.
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« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 10:36:11 AM »
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I would see if a longer focal length would make the lines parallel. More character?
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« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 11:35:57 AM »
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I see the concept well enough. It's a creative idea. But the photograph "of that idea" isn't delivering much punch. It might be simply too obvious. I don't think it's a technical problem with the photograph, it is photographed well enough. If you still like the idea, PURSUE IT. Which mean, find another way to present this idea with a photograph. Try something else.

There's always this conflict: What your mind imagines the photograph will look like vs. what actually comes out on the photograph. When it doesn't work, think about why, adjust your plan, and re-photograph it.

It came out quite close to what I had in mind.
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« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 11:38:11 AM »
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It came out quite close to what I had in mind.
Excellent. We always hope for that!
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« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2013, 02:59:49 PM »
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This strikes me as a swing and a miss. It doesn't do anything for me.

I understand the impulse to shoot it, I shoot this sort of thing from time to time. Later, I realize it's not as cool as it looked.
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