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Chris Calohan
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« on: February 17, 2013, 11:46:48 PM »
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« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 01:00:48 AM »
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Yup.  That it is!  Except for the local wildlife, anyway.  Did you consider doing any keystone correction, or are you content with it as is?

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« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 07:27:25 AM »
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I did some but honestly think the building is leaning forward in its journey toward total oblivion. Will check however. Thanks for the observation..

As to local wildlife, I never saw the first thing fly, crawl, run, slither or (no water of course), swim by and I was there for over an hour. This was as quiet and desolate a place as I've ever been.
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« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 07:55:22 AM »
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Slight processing variation. Redo did reveal a slight tilt abberation as a smidgeon of perspective off.
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« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 12:41:12 PM »
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Quote from: chrisc on February 18, 2013, 07:55:22 AM
Slight processing variation. Redo did reveal a slight tilt abberation as a smidgeon of perspective off.

You couldn't give it just a tad more space on the right, could you? It looks cramped.

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« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 12:51:54 PM »
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Quote from: kikashi on February 18, 2013, 12:41:12 PM
You couldn't give it just a tad more space on the right, could you? It looks cramped.

Jeremy

I agree and I would try either to reshoot or use content-aware tool in PP.
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« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2013, 12:55:49 PM »
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I will probably do a reshoot and go for a more horizontal composition.
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« Reply #7 on: February 19, 2013, 02:47:17 AM »
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Quote from: chrisc on February 18, 2013, 12:55:49 PM
I will probably do a reshoot and go for a more horizontal composition.

That's certainly worth a try, but it wasn't my point. The dark sky complements the abandoned building. I like the vertical composition: I'd just prefer it (as the punchline in the original shaggy dog story almost goes) not so damn vertical.

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« Reply #8 on: February 19, 2013, 08:03:35 AM »
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That was my "not as successful as I thought it would be" attempt to give the building back some of its former majesty, lording over the community it supported for so long.

I do understand what you're getting at and I will incoporprate that vertical/horizontal thinking into the next compositions.
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