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garyhill
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« on: April 04, 2013, 08:32:17 AM »
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The attached image is taken in Newcastle, Australia and shows Nobby's Lighthouse in the distance. This image is part of a portfolio that I am slowly building to offer for sale in my local area. This is not a local scene as such for me, but Nobbys is well known to anyone who has spent time in Newcastle.

Comments and suggestions for improvement welcome.

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Gary

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« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2013, 09:05:01 AM »
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A very fine image. IMHO, I want to put a half stop exposure gradient from foreground to horizon. Love the colors.
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« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2013, 05:33:20 PM »
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I like the composition and the colors of this picture but I'm not unbiased as love rocky shore-lines in general.
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« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2013, 09:53:06 PM »
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I like the angles, colours and motion. A little dark in the foreground?
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« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2013, 06:54:09 AM »
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I like it as it is… The foreground might be a tad dark but it doesn't grab my eyes…
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« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2013, 07:59:33 AM »
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I like the angles, colours and motion. A little dark in the foreground?

I think so too Gary. 
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« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2013, 09:28:16 AM »
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Hi Gary,

I like your photo, but
I think it can be improved by stressing the diagonal in lower-left part.
Here is what I mean (it’s a lousy job just to show the idea):

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« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2013, 10:10:14 AM »
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This is my kind of image and I don't see anything that can be improved in a meaningful way. A mistake - imo - is to keep making small tweaks and never be satisfied. This is something that should sell well and very likeable. Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: April 08, 2013, 05:07:17 PM »
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Thank you for the comments and suggestions. I appreciate the feedback.

Cheers,

Gary

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www.nghill.net/garyhill
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