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batmura
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« on: October 16, 2013, 12:59:01 PM »
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Riva in B&W by batmura, on Flickr
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« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 02:34:20 AM »
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I really like the feel and overall tonality of this image. However on close inspection their are distracting artefacts around major objects. The foreground rock has a visible white line around the top and the horizon looks a little strange. These are a visible on my phone. With  care in selection and a bit of feathering this could be a brilliant image. Ken
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« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 03:24:37 AM »
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I agree, lots of potential, but needs more careful processing?
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« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 06:12:39 AM »
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Now is that sky is a bit too much? Wink. Try darkening just the Shadows in your grad filter.
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« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 07:38:17 AM »
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John, I was trying to get the sky really dark as per your valuable advice. Guess I failed (again). Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 11:05:29 AM »
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Grad skies are always a subjective thing!
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« Reply #6 on: October 17, 2013, 01:37:24 PM »
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I really like the feel and overall tonality of this image. However on close inspection their are distracting artefacts around major objects. The foreground rock has a visible white line around the top and the horizon looks a little strange. These are a visible on my phone. With  care in selection and a bit of feathering this could be a brilliant image. Ken
Ken, is this processing any better? I tried to follow your advice and this is the result.


Riva by batmura, on Flickr
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« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2013, 02:49:48 PM »
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I'm still seeing halos. But I like the composition, tones and textures.
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« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2013, 05:14:29 PM »
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I agree with ken - it would be an outstanding image if not for the white lines (still visible).  Its a great composition and I think the best one you've done so far (that I've seen)
Well done.
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