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« Reply #20 on: October 23, 2013, 02:12:55 PM »
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To me, each of the views has esthetic merit and each has a different subject and "message" that should be left to the artist. Again, I like each of the renderings. I think only Armand can decide what he intends. Of course this is obvious. Jes sayin...
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« Reply #21 on: October 23, 2013, 02:28:49 PM »
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Okay, Chris. I surrender. After all, it's your picture.

All your base are belong to us ..... Tongue
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« Reply #22 on: October 23, 2013, 04:52:22 PM »
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Huh

It's not just flying, Chris. There's a corollary between the kind of aloneness you expressed in your posts, before they got prettied up, and the human condition. You may be an enthusiastic member of a prettied-up society during your life, but at the end you're as alone as that guy beside his campfire.
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« Reply #23 on: October 23, 2013, 05:22:00 PM »
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Huh

It's not just flying, Chris. There's a corollary between the kind of aloneness you expressed in your posts, before they got prettied up, and the human condition. You may be an enthusiastic member of a prettied-up society during your life, but at the end you're as alone as that guy beside his campfire.

After all I believe our discussion proves at least its a strong image - one way round or the other ... Smiley
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« Reply #24 on: October 25, 2013, 09:06:13 PM »
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Well, I'm glad you can go beyond the technical deficiencies of this shot, I was almost ready to give up so I'm glad I posted it here.
While I get it that technically is better with more detail around, I still prefer it in the initial version as it enhances the feeling of solitude and that was what I was trying to communicate. That being said if it's not overdone some detail looks it's not going to be as bad as I thought it might be initially.
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« Reply #25 on: October 26, 2013, 07:40:17 AM »
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Bravo Armand.
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« Reply #26 on: October 26, 2013, 09:55:35 AM »
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+1.
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« Reply #27 on: February 01, 2014, 02:20:24 PM »
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This is the version I printed on a canvas. I kept the shadows more open than initially to give a connection with the surroundings but I cloned the foreground building to keep the feeling of isolation that I was trying to convey in the first place.
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« Reply #28 on: February 01, 2014, 02:35:00 PM »
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Looks great to me - I hope you are as happy with your print.
Cheers
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« Reply #29 on: February 01, 2014, 09:23:03 PM »
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This is the version I printed on a canvas. I kept the shadows more open than initially to give a connection with the surroundings but I cloned the foreground building to keep the feeling of isolation that I was trying to convey in the first place.

I like your final result very much.
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« Reply #30 on: February 02, 2014, 05:18:03 AM »
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Way too much light in the camp.
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« Reply #31 on: February 02, 2014, 09:08:38 AM »
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Way too much light in the camp.
Yes, I tried to compensate for the small size. I print it's not that obvious though.
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